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Carntall Primary School, Clogher, County Tyrone
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Shaving foam marble planets for instructional writing.

23rd Feb 2023

P3/4 were over the moon when they heard they were going to be creating marble planets. The planets link to their instructional writing and their topic of "Twinkle Twinkle". During modelled writing time, pupils will be able to evaluate the teachers' instructions, idenitfy key featurues of instructional writing from seeing What A Good One Looks Like (A good example) and understand how to correct mistakes, edit and redraft.